Comparing - 2 (Revised)

John Adams and Thomas Jefferson both assumed identical characters in the past. First of all, both John Adams and Thomas Jefferson played the important roles in American Revolution. Next, John Adams delegated to the Continental Congress, and so did Thomas Jefferson. Third, John Adams was the U.S. president; likewise, Thomas Jefferson was the president of Uinted Stated. Besides, John Adams was the signer of Declaration of Independence, and Thomas Jefferson was too. Fifth, John Adams as well as Thomas Jefferson studied and practice law. Finally, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson died on the same date. Needless to say, they are such important individuals in America history.

Comparing - 1 (Revised)

Stephanie Brook's and Ann Friedman's information of their diver's licenses are almost the same. First, Stephanie's eyes are the same color as Ann's. Besides, both Stephanie and Ann have black hair. In addition, Stephanie is as tall as Ann's. Finally, Stephanie's birthday is on July 31, 1981. Similarly, Ann's birthday is on July, 31, 1981. I hope they will check their names and the pictures on the licenses carefully if they both miss their licenses at the same time, or they may take a wrong one.

Expressing an Opinion - 2

Do you support that researchers use animals in laboratory experiments? In my opinion, I regard it as a crult thing. First of all, it is not fair for the animals on account of they are still have their rights. Owing to the activity, there must be many protesters who are against to the behavior for the rights of the animals in the law. Moreover, the results of the animals in the experiments which are conducted by the researchers don't always correspond those are done on people. If the consequence on people doesn't meet the results done on animals, then the animals are just sacrificed. Eventually, the animals' gene is possiblely changed during the experiments. If some of the animal escape one day, then they may reproduce their generation and develope the strange gene. That will casue a big problem for other creations to be disturbed by the mutation animals. For the views above, it is very improper for the researchers to perform the experiments on animals.

Expressing an Opinion - 1

In my opinion, it good for students to wear uniform when they are going to school. There are some following reasons for which I support that. At the first, if every student wears uniform, it will be looked more neat when they enter the school, instead of a mess. Besides, it will be more easy to identify which school the student belongs to. Otherwise, maybe there will be a bad guy who wants to sneak into the school or acts as a member of the school. Then do some bad things to abash the order of the school. Finally, the students don't need to think about what they should wear the next day. That is to say, if the school asks them to wear uniforms, then they don't have to worry about the clothes which they will dress on repeatedly. For the points above, I think wear uniform is still a good thing for student to prevent themslves from some problems.

Giving reasons - Revisd 1

In Taiwan, winter is the season that I like the most. And there are some following reasons. First, during winter, I will go out with long-sleeved clothes and trousers for it is cold outside. So that I won't be browned when it is a sunny day and I will sweat less even go exercising. Second, wearing skirt in school is very uncomfortable and inconvenient to me; in winter, I needn't do that. Last, I think no one likes to be bitten by mosquitos and I am no exception, because it will make me itch. In winter, there are less mosquitos than those in other seasons, especially in summer. For the reasons above, I really think that winter is the best season in Taiwan.

Contrasting - 1

My friend and I are looking for an apartment to share near campus. Yesterday, I saw two descriptions of apartments on the Internet, Fairtax Apartments and Campus APT. They both are near campus, but there are still a few differences between them. At first,  the former has two bedrooms, while the latter has olny one. It means that if I choose the latter, I have to sleep with my friend in the same room, but if I choose the former, we can have individual rooms. Next, the former has furniture already; in contrast, the latter hasn't yet. Third, the former doesn't allow pets, whereas the latter does. Finally, the former is expensive than the latter. The rent of the former is 1250 a month; on the other hand, the rent of the latter is only 900 per month. For the differences above, I think I have to discuss with my friend for a couple day. Maybe I should ask whether she owns pets or not, or does she has any better ideas about other apartments.

Comparing - 3

Ruby and Vicky both are my English teachers. The former is in junior high school, while the latter is in senior high school. I think they are good at teaching for some identical characters. First, Ruby is generous and humorous but little serious sometimes, and so is Vicky. Then, Ruby teaches her students very patiently. Similarly, Vicky teaches her students very carfully and patiently. Third, Ruby is thin but a little short; likewise, Vicky is very thin and also a bit short. Finally, they never punish students by violence, but teach with patience and love. That's why I remeber they so clearly and impressively.