2011年6月16日 星期四

Best works of the semester-3

Few months ago, one of my best friends went abroad for advanced studying. Now, she lives in New York with her host family. We have known each other since we were kids for we were neignbors and grew together for at least ten years. She is shorter than me by five centimeters or so, and she is average weight. Besides, she dyed her hair brown before going abroad. As to her appearance, she has big eyes and a tall and straight nose. And she was many boys' ideal object of courtship when she was in the senior high school because she looks very delicate and pretty with white skin and slender figure. I miss her very much and want to meet her as soon as possible after she comes back to Taiwan.

Best works of the semester-2

In recent years, health consciousness has raisen all over the world. Many healthful products are also sold on the market. In my opinion, a couple of methods can allow you to keep healthy easily in your daily life. The first thing you should do is exercise more and regularly. Exercising can not only keep you healthy but also have your figure stay in a good shape. Next, retain a good eating habit. Drink more water instead of beverage and eat more vegetables rather than meat. Finally, eat less fast food and junk food like snacks at ordinary times, and don't eat extra meals after having dinner. Follow the tips above, and your health may get better and better.

Best works of the semester-1

There was a trip that I remembered very clearly. I had been to Thailand for five days with my mother and brother on the summer vacation when I was at the age of ten. On one of the five days, I did lots of water sports,including diving and feeding the tropical fish in the water. After that exhausting day, I felt very tired, so I took a shower and wanted to sleep at once. But my mother and brother wanted to go to the convenient store, asking me whether I would like to go with them. But I declined, so they left me alone in the room. Before sleeping, I did such a stupid thing that I locked the door together with the two security locks. Because of what I had done, my mother and brother were locked outside by me. Worst of all, my mother spent five hundred dollars having the hotel staff tear down the door which connected with the next room. The most ridiculous thing was that I didn't wake up during the whole night! I didn't know what I had done until the next day morning. And everyone in the same tour was laughing at me the next day whenever they saw me. Now, I still consider that I was very silly about doing that thing.

Disgussing Effects - 1(Revised)

The pressure from school has done lots of effects on many students. One of the first thing is that it causes some mental and physical problems. For example,it may lead to girls' menstrual disorder or ordinary students' constipation, which perplex students deeply. Additionally, it also brings about headaches and bedazzles students a lot. Many students become very upset for suffering too much pressure from their school. On the other hand, those pressure may probably inspire students to study harder, making them reach higher achievements. To sum up, the pressure from school should be appropriate and it may do well for students.

2011年6月15日 星期三

Contrasting - 2(Revised)

I'm hiring a new English instructor for my school. After reading the two resumes from Lynn Whitenall and Debra Fines, I think I would choose the latter, and there are some reasons below. First, Debra is more educational than Lynn. The former has three educations, while the latter has only one. Additionally, Lynn doesn't  have much employment experience, her experience has only three times. In contrast, Debra's experience is very rich that she has five times. Finally, although Lynn can speak three different languages, which is more than the other's one language only, it is not a problem for me to choose Debra. Because I just want to hire a English instructor. For the points above, I think Debra is the perfect teacher I will choose.

Discussing Cause - 1(Revised)

I think it is very important for me to choose my major in senior high school or college. First of all, it is not a subject only and possibly has something to do with my jobs in the future. Next, I must be interested in that major, or it will be a hard time for me to learn its details. It's because if I don't like or have no interests in the major, I will not want to learn it more; needless to say, specialize in that major. Finally, once I choose the major, it will be very problematic for me to give up and choose another one afterwards. It means that I have to restart and learn new things, and I will lag behind those who learn the major earlier than me. So, thinking twice before choosing a major is essential for it may accompany me throughout my life.

Expressing an Opinion - 2(Revised)

Do you support that researchers use animals in laboratory experiments? In my opinion, I regard it as a cruel thing. First of all, it is not fair for the animals because they still have their rights. Owing to the activity, there must be many protesters who are against the behavior for the rights of the animals in the law. Moreover, the results of the animals in the experiments which are conducted by the researchers don't always correspond to those are done on people. If the consequence on people doesn't meet the results done on animals, then the animals are the sacrifice of the experiments. Eventually, the animals' gene is possibly changed during the experiments. If some animals escape one day, then they may reproduce their generation and develop strange genes. That will cause a big problem for other creations to be disturbed by the mutant animals. For the views above, it is very improper for researchers to perform the experiments on animals.

Expressing an Opinion - 1(Revised)

In my opinion, it is good for students to wear uniform when they go to school. There are some following reasons for which I support that. At first, if every student wears uniform, it will be looked neater when they enter the school instead of a mess. Besides, it will be easier to identify which school the student belongs to. Otherwise, maybe there will be a bad guy who wants to sneak into the school or acts as a member of the school to do some bad things to abash the order of the school. Finally, the students don't need to think about what they should wear the next day. That is to say, if the school asks them to wear uniform, then they don't have to worry about the clothes which they will dress on repeatedly. For the points above, I think wearing uniform is still a good thing for student to prevent themselves from some problems.

Comparing - 3(Revised)

Ruby and Vicky both are my English teachers. The former is in junior high school, while the latter is in senior high school. I think they are good at teaching for some identical characters. First, Ruby is generous and humorous but little serious sometimes, and so is Vicky. Then, Ruby teaches her students very patiently. Similarly, Vicky teaches her students very carefully and softly. Third, Ruby is thin but a little short; likewise, Vicky is very thin and also a bit short. Finally, they never punish students by violence, but teach with patience and love. That's why I remember they so clearly and impressively.

2011年6月9日 星期四

Disgussing Effects - 1

The pressure of school has done lots of effects on many students. One of the first things is that it causes some mental and physical problems. For example,it may lead to girls' menstrual disorder or ordinary students' constipation, which perplex students deeply. Additionally, it also brings about headaches and bedazzles students a lot. On the other hand, those pressure may probably inspire students to study harder, making them reach higher achievements. To sum up, the pressure of school should be appropriate then it may do good for students.

2011年6月1日 星期三

Comparing - 3 (Revised)

Ruby and Vicky both are my English teachers. The former is in junior high school, while the latter is in senior high school. I think they are good at teaching for some identical characters. First, Ruby is generous and humorous but little serious sometimes, and so is Vicky. Then, Ruby teaches her students very patiently. Similarly, Vicky teaches her students very carefully and patiently. Third, Ruby is thin but a little short; likewise, Vicky is very thin and also a bit short. Finally, they never punish students by violence, but teach with patience and love. That's why I remember they so clearly and impressively.

Contrasting - 2

I'm hiring a new English instructor for my school. After reading the two resumes from Lynn Whitenall and Debra Fines, I think I would choose the latter, and there are some reasons below. First, Debra has more education than Lynn. The former has three educations, while the latter has only one. Additionally, Lynn doesn't  have much employment experience, her experience has only three times. In contrast, Debra's experience is so rich that she has five times. Finally, although Lynn can speak three different languages, which is more than the other's one language only, it is not a problem for me to choose Debra. Because I just want to hire a English instructor. For the points above, I think Debra is the perfect teacher I will choose.

Discussing Cause - 1

I think it is very important for me to choose my major in senior high school or college. First of all, it is not a subject only and possibly have something to do with my jobs in the future. Next, I must be interested in that major, or it will be a hard time for me to learn its details. Because if I don't like or have no interests in the major, I will not want to learn it more; needless to say, specialize in that major. Finally, once I choose the major, it will be very problematic for me to give up and choose another one afterwards. It means that I have to restart and learn new things, and my skills will lag behind those who are earlier than me to learn the major. So, thinking twice before choosing a major is essential for it may accompany me throughout my life.