2011年4月13日 星期三

Describing a person

Few months ago, one of my best friends went abroad for advanced studying. Now, she lives in New York with her host family. We have known each other since we were kids for we were neignbors and grew together for at least ten years. She is shorter than me by five centimeters or so, and she is average weight. Besides, she dyed her hair brown before going abroad. As to her appearance, she has big eyes and a tall and straight nose. And she was many boys' ideal object of courtship because she looks very delicate and pretty with white skin and slender figure. I miss her very much and want to meet her as soon as possible after she comes back to Taiwan.

8 則留言:

  1. 第三行是grew up together....

    我覺得句子承接的還不錯!!

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  2. 大致上沒什麼問題耶!
    文章內容很順暢~~~~

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  3. She is shorter than me by five centimeters or so(可是我們不知道你的身高,所以也不會知道他的身高!!)

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  4. And she was many boys' ideal object 用 is 吧!
    讚+1

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  5. 蠻好的!沒什麼錯誤~語意也通順
    只是沒提到妳的身高!

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  6. 不知道你幾公分喔
    然後蠻通順的

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