2011年4月5日 星期二

Explaining a Process (4) - How to Stay Healthy

In recent years, healthy consciousness has raisen all over the world. Many healthy products also sell on the market conditions. In my opinion, a couple of methods can have you keep healthy easily in your daily life. The first thing you should do is exercise more. Exercising can not only keep you healthy but also have your figure stay in a good shape. Next, keep a good eating habit. Drink more water instead of beverage and eat more vegetables rather than meat. Finally, eat less fast food or junk food like snacks at ordinary times, and don't eat extra meals after having dinner. Follow the tips above, your health may get better and better.

8 則留言:

  1. 寫的不錯喲~
    給的意見很好呢!!

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  2. sell 是不是應該用被動!?

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  3. The first thing you should do is exercise more.
    改The first thing you should do is exercise regularly. 然後把運動333寫進去~純屬個人意見~呵呵!!!
    讚+1

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  4. 沒什麼問題,只是第二行的sell是不是應該用被動?
    keep似乎也蠻常出現,如果可以,是否可以換成其他詞?
    寫的蠻好的!!

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  5. 我覺得轉折詞很OK
    整體沒什麼錯誤

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  6. The first thing you should do 要加that喔~
    其他沒問題!!!
    good good wei XD

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  7. fast food 和 junk food 幾乎要一樣了所以要不要選一個寫就好:D?

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