2011年4月20日 星期三

Giving reasons - My Favorite Season

It's needless to say that there are four seasons in a year. In Taiwan, winter is the season that I like the most. And there are some following reasons. First, during winter, I will go out with Long-sleeved clothes and trousers for it is cold outside. So that I won't be browned when it is a sunny day and I will sweat less even go exercising. Second, wearing skirt in school is very uncomfortable and inconvenient to me; in winter, I needn't do that. Last, I think no one likes to be bite by mosquitos and I am no exception, because it will make me itch. In winter, there are less mosquitos than those in other seasons, especially in summer. For the reasons above, I really think that winter is the best season in Taiwan.

7 則留言:

  1. I really think that winter is the best season in Taiwan (如果說題目是My Favorite Season 那麼結論句這樣寫會不會很奇怪阿?!)

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  2. 是be "bitten" by mosquitos!
    結尾句改一下會比較好!

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  3. It's needless to say that there are four seasons in a year. In Taiwan, winter is the season that I like the most
    這幾句感覺像在繞口令..
    整篇文章太多reason和season會看到眼花撩亂

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  4. be bite →be bitten
    倒數第三行because前面應該不用逗點吧...

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  5. ~to be bite by mosquitos~ bite=>bitten
    結論句微怪 要不要改一下讓他可以跟主題呼應

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  6. 我怎麼覺得不想穿裙子的成分佔最多ㄚ!呵呵~開玩笑的啦!
    Long-sleeved 為什麼要大寫阿?
    第一句有點怪怪的~有點多餘的感覺~

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  7. For the reasons above, I really think that winter is the best season in Taiwan. 應該不用強調in Taiwan吧

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