Ruby and Vicky both are my English teachers. The former is in junior high school, while the latter is in senior high school. I think they are good at teaching for some identical characters. First, Ruby is generous and humorous but little serious sometimes, and so is Vicky. Then, Ruby teaches her students very patiently. Similarly, Vicky teaches her students very carfully and patiently. Third, Ruby is thin but a little short; likewise, Vicky is very thin and also a bit short. Finally, they never punish students by violence, but teach with patience and love. That's why I remeber they so clearly and impressively.
Ruby teaches her students very patiently. Similarly, Vicky teaches her students very carfully and patiently.有些字重複唷!可換個方式寫,其他就沒有什麼問題
回覆刪除還有Vicky不是很高嗎….XDD(我自己覺得啦)
Vicky teaches her students very carfully and patiently.(carefully)
回覆刪除remeber(remember)
然後我想問
你的國中老師真的叫Ruby嗎!?
Ruby teaches her students~Vicky~patiently.後面的patiently要不要改成softly 這樣就不會重複字了
回覆刪除carfully→carefully~
回覆刪除最後一行remember
倒數第4行carefully喔!
回覆刪除最後一句remember
整篇文章沒什麼問題
句子再多一點變化會更漂亮!
carefully拼錯了~
回覆刪除除了字拼錯其他沒什麼錯~
第3點和她們很擅長教學好像沒關係ㄋㄟ~
回覆刪除其他都很順暢喔!