2011年5月18日 星期三

Contrasting - 1

My friend and I are looking for an apartment to share near campus. Yesterday, I saw two descriptions of apartments on the Internet, Fairtax Apartments and Campus APT. They both are near campus, but there are still a few differences between them. At first,  the former has two bedrooms, while the latter has olny one. It means that if I choose the latter, I have to sleep with my friend in the same room, but if I choose the former, we can have individual rooms. Next, the former has furniture already; in contrast, the latter hasn't yet. Third, the former doesn't allow pets, whereas the latter does. Finally, the former is expensive than the latter. The rent of the former is 1250 a month; on the other hand, the rent of the latter is only 900 per month. For the differences above, I think I have to discuss with my friend for a couple day. Maybe I should ask whether she owns pets or not, or does she has any better ideas about other apartments.

3 則留言:

  1. 1250和900後面要加dollars喔
    does she has不用does,因為or是對等連接詞兩句子架構要一致~

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  2. 可以再加一點附加論點~這樣比較豐富~

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