2011年5月25日 星期三
Expressing an Opinion - 2
Do you support that researchers use animals in laboratory experiments? In my opinion, I regard it as a crult thing. First of all, it is not fair for the animals on account of they are still have their rights. Owing to the activity, there must be many protesters who are against to the behavior for the rights of the animals in the law. Moreover, the results of the animals in the experiments which are conducted by the researchers don't always correspond those are done on people. If the consequence on people doesn't meet the results done on animals, then the animals are just sacrificed. Eventually, the animals' gene is possiblely changed during the experiments. If some of the animal escape one day, then they may reproduce their generation and develope the strange gene. That will casue a big problem for other creations to be disturbed by the mutation animals. For the views above, it is very improper for the researchers to perform the experiments on animals.
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張貼留言 (Atom)
crult是拼錯嗎?我查不到...
回覆刪除還是妳是要拼cruel?
on account of後面接名詞唷!
如果是接名詞子句前面可能要加個what之類的
correspond要加介係詞
some of the animal-->some animals
crult ?
回覆刪除on account of後面好像要接N
If some of the animal escape animal+s?
*第二行crult→cruel,on account of(後加名詞) → because/,for /,as,擇一八~
回覆刪除*~against to the behavore. → against 是介係詞喔!不用再加to
*第五行correspond "to"
*the animals are just sacrificed.感覺很怪...
the animals are the sacrifice of the experiments.
(sacrifice 是及物動詞/名詞)
*倒數第四行animal"s"
*倒數第三行the strange gene→ strange genes。我覺得不用加the,gene為可數名詞。
* That will casue a big problem for other creations to be disturbed by the mutation animals. 看不懂耶~ creation?? to be disturbed by ??這句要改一下...
*最後一行我覺得不用加the 因為沒有特定的researchs。
嗯..我覺得這篇有些的句子用法怪怪的...我只有挑一些我可能會改的部份出來而已...妳再看看其他人有沒有幫你挑到了...
以上僅供參考了~(我怕誤讀你文章的意思...)
crult (cruel)
回覆刪除on account of+N.
possiblely(你是要寫possibly嗎!?)
develope(develop)
casue(cause)
crult是什麼,妳是要打殘忍的嗎?
回覆刪除If some of the animal , animal要加s
mutation是名詞 要改mutant(adj.)才對吧!
論點都超讚~
文章開頭要有空格唷!!
回覆刪除crult 你是想拼cruel嗎?
on account of後面要加名詞
correspond後面介係詞加to?