2011年6月1日 星期三
Contrasting - 2
I'm hiring a new English instructor for my school. After reading the two resumes from Lynn Whitenall and Debra Fines, I think I would choose the latter, and there are some reasons below. First, Debra has more education than Lynn. The former has three educations, while the latter has only one. Additionally, Lynn doesn't have much employment experience, her experience has only three times. In contrast, Debra's experience is so rich that she has five times. Finally, although Lynn can speak three different languages, which is more than the other's one language only, it is not a problem for me to choose Debra. Because I just want to hire a English instructor. For the points above, I think Debra is the perfect teacher I will choose.
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more education感覺怪怪的
回覆刪除Debra's experience is so rich that she has five times.(so that 不是如此..以致於嗎!?這樣怪怪的耶!!)
Debra's experience is so rich that she has five times.這句用so...that感覺有點奇怪~可換個寫法唷!
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Debra's experience is so rich that she has five times.什麼戴布拉的經驗是如此豐富以至於他有五次@o@?
回覆刪除Debra's experience is so rich that she has five times
回覆刪除用so...that很怪
我覺得結論句有點怪怪的欸
回覆刪除Debra's experience is so rich that she has five times.雖然大概懂意思可是怪怪的耶
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