2011年6月1日 星期三
Discussing Cause - 1
I think it is very important for me to choose my major in senior high school or college. First of all, it is not a subject only and possibly have something to do with my jobs in the future. Next, I must be interested in that major, or it will be a hard time for me to learn its details. Because if I don't like or have no interests in the major, I will not want to learn it more; needless to say, specialize in that major. Finally, once I choose the major, it will be very problematic for me to give up and choose another one afterwards. It means that I have to restart and learn new things, and my skills will lag behind those who are earlier than me to learn the major. So, thinking twice before choosing a major is essential for it may accompany me throughout my life.
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標題打錯囉應該是cause XDD
回覆刪除用字沒什麼問題~
First of all, it is not a subject only and possibly have something to do with my jobs in the future.(have-->has)
回覆刪除once可以改成as soon as喔!!
Because 可以直接用在開頭嗎?
回覆刪除要不要改It's because
其他沒什麼問題喔!
~ my skills will lag behind those who are earlier than me to learn the major. → ~ I will lag behind those who learn the major earlier than me.
回覆刪除大致上都沒問題
回覆刪除提醒一下,開頭要有空格唷~!
回覆刪除其他就沒問題了
我找不到康門
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