My name is Li-Wei Huang, I have five members in my family. My father was very busy when I was a little child; therefore, he didn’t spend much time accompanying with me. Although I am not very close to my father, he does treat me well actually. He allows me to do whatever I want to do as long as he thinks that the thing makes sense. Besides, there is a thing that he always insists on, and that is-never tell a lie. He once told me that even if you make a mistake, admitting is always better lying. And I keep it in my mind all along. My mother is an employee; for my family, she is a great mother certainly. She takes good care of my whole family, and the most important thing is that she cooks for dinner almost every day. I’ve heard many friends of mine usually eat dinner outside, and I think I am really a lucky child. My elder sister is 26 years old. The age gap between us is 9, so she treasures me a lot and often buys a lot of thing for me. I think my sister is very independent and just like a super woman, because she left home to study college in Kaohsiung when she was 18-year-old. In her times, I considered it was very difficult to do that, but she made it and found a job there successfully. I hope I can be as competent as she in the near future. My brother is a professional soldier now. He just graduated from Kun Shan University , and passed the test of military to be qualified as a soldier smoothly. Now he is still under training in Taichung , and comes home every weekend. I think he is pretty satisfied with the job at present.
He once told me that even if you make a mistake, admitting is always better lying.
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結論句要不要寫一下~
寫的很好喔!!!讚*3
accompanying with me不用with喔~他是及物動詞
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He once told me that even if you make a mistake, admitting is always better lying. better後要不要加than
回覆刪除最後面那個我哥哥那個啊你要不要改一下說什麼我哥哥是職業軍人,所以都教我什麼做事要有紀律之類的~~
admitting is always better lying. 少了一個than囉
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